Nelson+Abortion

The paths a fetus’ life can take are like a mouse’s life. Some babies are aborted which is like a wild mouse that is considered a pest and is killed. Others are delivered and cared for by their parents and live out their lives fully which is like a pet mouse who is taken care of by a human. The rest of the babies are delivered but not cared for which is like a wild mouse who is not killed by a human but not cared by one either.
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Abortion is immoral, irresponsible and murder and should be illegal all across the United States. An abortion is contradictory to many religions and most people believe it is the taking of a human life. No circumstance should call for an abortion or murder. 1) Since Roe v. Wade there have been 35 million legal abortions in the United States. 2) One in a hundred thousand women die from surgical abortion. 3) Skin biopsy can give as much tissue in 2 weeks as 100 fetuses can give. Confirmation or rejection of one or two commonly held beliefs about this topic 1) Fetal tissue experimentation has not delivered much promise as only one out of three Parkinson’s patients have shown any significant progress with long term status unknown. 2) The belief that there would be no unwanted child has not followed through as child abuse levels have not changed since before Roe v. Wade. ** Something to connect the topic to the reader's life so that he/she will care **  Women who aborted have a 72% higher rate of psychiatric admission than women who delivered their baby which proves post-abortion emotional problems. These emotional problems should be highly acknowledged as women who have aborted in the last year are six times more likely to commit suicide while childbirth is proven to reduce suicide. The women are treated with drugs and have been resembled as zombie-like.   We should follow the ancient Assyrians not so harshly but in their belief that any woman who have an abortion “shall be… impaled upon a stake and not be buried." Abortion Faqs
 * ~ When women have abortions (in weeks from the last menstrual period) ||
 * Eighty-nine percent of abortions occur in the first 12 weeks of pregnancy, 2004. ||
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 * ~ Number of abortions per 1,000 women aged 15-44, by year ||
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